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The Novel I am Writing

The last few days I’ve been thinking about writing again. In high school and early university I very seriously tried writing a novel, but was never happy with it. I thought that my plot and descriptions of location and surroundings were good, but my characters were very flat, two dimensional and not very engaging. A couple of years ago I tried again, but didn’t have any clear direction re: no plot or storyline so gave up after a short while despite having plans for a novel of epic proportions.

Here I am again. I’ve been thinking on this for a few days and have decided to start writing again. I’ve got some of my world outlined, character bios started and a basic plot completed. I’ve also completed the first 600 words of chapter one, though clearly that will need a rewrite sometime in the future.

I’m planning on writing a fantasy novel of the swords and sorcery variety. This is my favorite genre and consequently the one I am most familiar with re: conventions. I’ve decided to avoid high fantasy with elves, orcs and other fantastical creatures, but rather have a world populated by only humans. Creating relationships between humans is difficult enough without having to add in further complexities of fantasy races.

The novel will essentially be a quest in the spirit of Harry Potter or Indiana Jones where the protagonist must accomplish some distant goal and overcome adversity along the way. I’m not interested in writing complex battle scenes of massive armies attacking one another, though battle will no doubt make it into the novel. Keeping my focus on a small group of travellers will avoid having to write about battles – I’ve never even been able to follow strategy of battle so do not see how I could possibly write one.

There will be a lot of parallels with my own life, one should write what one knows correct? For example, the main character lives abroad and struggles to return to his home country during a period of political and personal upheaval. The story will comment on bureaucracies, cultural relativism, and the nature of right and wrong. Other aspects will include thoughts on long term expats fitting into their host culture or not (what to accept and what not to as well as the different degress that various expats can easily adapt) and the responsibilities of expats to learn the language.

I have a lot to say about bureaucracies, cultural relativism and expat life. Hopefully I can write it well enough for others to enjoy. Guess we’ll find out after I get the third or fourth draft complete. I know that not everyone finishes the novel they set out to write let alone gets published, but the point is not to get published but rather to write for myself. Once I’m satisfied with it I may publish the novel online in chapters in a blog or in some other format.

Have any of my readers written fiction before? been published? non-fiction and published? I wrote a newspaper column for 10 months, but that’s the extent of my publications.

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Steve: Wednesday Aug 25, 2010  at  01:17 AM Korea (South)

I wrote a novel fresh out of undergrad that is sitting in the drawer of an abandoned desk somewhere in my parents’ basement. It was an awesome process that I loved even though I never did anything with it.

Similar to you, I’ve recently been bitten by the bug again and have written some preliminary stuff. Last time, I just steamrolled through it all from beginning to end, but this time I’m trying to be more methodical about it and lay some groundwork.

This one is about a guy that became an expat in search of adventure, money and himself and ends up basically getting chewed up and spit out the other end having found everything he was looking for, but not in any way that he had expected.

So yeah, it’s pretty much a thinly-veiled autobiography grin

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Sean: Wednesday Aug 25, 2010  at  01:49 AM Korea (South)

Steve,

Perhaps we should meet up to talk about writing and coffee. I’m not sure where you are located, but I’m sure we can arrange somewhere mutually convenient. Let me know if you’re interested.

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Shelley: Wednesday Aug 25, 2010  at  02:50 AM Korea (South)

Loving the ideas. I think that’s a great take on fantasy. Let me know if you’d like an invite to our online writing group. You and Kali ( the fantasy writer in our group) might be helpful to each other. I’m looking forward to talking more about this over coffee. grin

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surprisesaplenty: Wednesday Aug 25, 2010  at  07:59 PM Korea (South)

I think about writing a book every year around this time; and also around the end of February.  For me, it is a kind of procrastination - I stop worrying or thinking about work deadlines by adding something else to the pile.  Sadly,  the urge usually fades after the first few weeks of the new semester.

There’ll be some language acquisition stuff and EFL geekery, right?
<i> He tiredly rested the tip of his bloody sword on a rung of the broken siege ladder and sighed, “If only they had followed Thornbury’s advice and practiced their juggling -they clearly needed better hand-eye coordination.  Of course if they did that, they would probably have also improved their communication skills and better translated their demand for reinforcements from their allies…”

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Sean: Wednesday Aug 25, 2010  at  09:17 PM Korea (South)

Shelley,
I’ll probably take you up on that offer, but not for a couple of weeks. Would like to get more done, before I start sharing especially with people I haven’t met yet.

Surpriseaplenty,
I could see the procrastination thing, but I don’t think that’s it for me as I don’t get this bug every year. Language stuff, absolutely. One of my main characters is a “researcher” at the Royal Academy of Continental Studies where he finds that he is mostly a language teacher. Another main character is a language teacher for nobles children.

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Paulie: Thursday Aug 26, 2010  at  07:56 AM Korea (South)

Just a few things I think you should include in the novel:

- The researcher goes beserk in the foreign culture over horse operators not stopping at the stop lanterns.

- Strange, spicy cabbage-based magic potion is proven to cure all life’s ills.

- One of the characters, probably a minor one, should die with the murder weapon being one of those hand-held Asian-ish accordian-style fans - you could call that chapter ‘Fan Death’.

- Everyone inexplicably slows down when they go into a tunnel.

- The researcher, to get accredited in the foreign land to do his critical research, must prove his solemn duty to the King by procuring a parchment sealed with the coat-of-arms from the court detailing his scholarly associations (with an apolostile) as well as a visit with the witchdoctor to verify that he hasn’t partaken in activities relating to unwed ‘maidens’ or the trickeries of the dark potions (approved by the Coven of the Wicked with blood fingerprints of all 13 members, of course).

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Sean: Thursday Aug 26, 2010  at  07:15 PM Korea (South)

Paulie,
All good one and a couple of those are already planned though in a waterer down version that any ESL instructor in Korea will easily recognize. Basically this novel is going to be fun for me to write.

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Customs Info: Friday Aug 27, 2010  at  06:23 AM Canada

Steven Erikson and R. Scott bakker are my favourite Authors of this genre. Now I cant read other authors as they have raised the bar so high. George RR Martin is ok too I guess. Erikson is Canadian too…which sadly suprised me as I dont give our authors much of a chance thanks to being force fed boring books in highschool just because they were Canadian…like Stone Angel..Margret Lawrence…yawn.
Good Luck with the project Sean… read Erikson or Bakker if you need inspiration…but be forewarned it might ruin you. lol

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Sean: Friday Aug 27, 2010  at  07:12 PM Korea (South)

Customs,
Coincidentally I’m reading R.Scott Bakker right now - The Warrior Prophet, am enjoying it but not as much as you did apparently. Haven’t read any Steven Erikson though. However I really loved George RR Martin’s books whose writing style is very different from Bakker.

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Customs Info: Friday Aug 27, 2010  at  07:54 PM Canada

yes very different styles…martin has hardly any magic too. I’ve read bakker’s trilogy and enjoyed them a lot…but erikson is hands down the master. again very different from martin.

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Woland: Monday Sep 6, 2010  at  10:19 AM Japan

Sean,

If you want a model of a very good fantasy writer who sets what he does in a world of all humans, try China Mieville. His novel, The City and The City, is pure brilliance - not wholly given over to fantasy, but clearly just off from this world. I’m not a huge fantasy fan, but this caught me, perhaps because he grounded it in the detective novel genre, which I do love.

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Sean: Monday Sep 6, 2010  at  07:00 PM United States

Woland,

Will definitely check out Mieville if I can find him in the bookstore. Was good to see you over coffee last Friday before you returned to Tokyo.

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Euan: Thursday Sep 9, 2010  at  10:01 AM Great Britain (UK)

You could always looking at publishing as an e-book.

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